June 11, 2025
🚨Question for you!🚨
Was the pacing of the narrative appropriate?
Is the story well paced?
Comments (1)
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Daerdestructor · June 12, 2025
I think it's going too quickly, I think the relationship between the MC and the girl is going a little quickly with the bathroom, it should take a little more time, since he doesn't like it at first
