ASS CHALLENGE Round 2:

Can't sleep so just about to try your latest version. Would be interested to see how you intend to use unused girls (Gemma, Corine etc) in the main game, and the teachers all built on (has Lera got anything to do yet?), From a use ability stand point your page that shows corruption needs more pages added so all characters are covered. As I said I haven't tried the latest version yet so I apologise if these points have already been addressed. Lastly I read some Leisure Yacht reviews on steam a while back and English gets bad reviews so hopefully if I get a period of feeling better I will send you some English corrections, not sure how I'll do this but hopefully enough make you understand mistakes made. Don't know if you plan to release on steam but I hope to help you out, I have your email and I don't want anything for it hopefully I'll be able to do something but can't promise. Some of your problems are typo's but some are real mistakes. Don't worry about it too much but it would be an idea to try and clean it up before full release.

Oops... I forgot the Marmoreal Lion girls... :) They will be involved in next round!