Feedback on possible Neil Routes
As you are enjoying the new update, tell us which of the following possible Neil routes gets you excited the most. It's multiple choice so pick two.
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I am just curious, is this still the planned routes. Cause I wouldn't mind these dom neil, dom Alex, sub Sarah sharing route. But based on club, we got the cheating one, dom neil, sub Alex and Sarah, dom Sarah and Neil, sub Alex and what seems like neutral if we let Alex lead, and is polite. So curious if that is still the plan cause dom neil in office still sounds hot. So just want to know if club routes are definitive routes locked in and that one is gone.
That will happen in dom Alex route. You should pick dom Alex in the club. But be polite with Neil and ask Sarah to dance with him.
Alguien me puede ayudar x que la verdad hago el pago y el banco me lo rechaza o hay otro sistema de pago xf
It's a game that has every chance of being the best. It depends on how the relationships between the characters will evolve. I would like Sarah to become more and more courageous..To experiment..blowjob, DP, Thresome, Gangban..at a party, With Neil....Without Alex..or with Alex Voyeur..Something like that..
I'm also thinking about option E, it looks interesting, but honestly I don't understand what exactly is being said because english is not my language. The word "neural". Please explain, because to me in translation it means something like "nervous"!?
It was supposed to be Neutral , like not dominating or submissive. Patreon doesn't allow we me to edit polls.
For me, the story goes in the direction of Sara's dominance, where Alex increasingly loses control over her and becomes submassive. After finding a video with a scene in the office, Sara is increasingly longing to feel a bigger penis, especially Neil's because she recognized him, and with hanging out with her friend, who has experience of exchanging partners, she is increasingly longing for men of greater capacity than Alex who can give her pleasure that she has not tasted. B, C and D are excellent scenarios for me, it goes in the direction of B for me, but I am also satisfied with C and D.
I chose option D, and it’s pretty clear that most players did the same. Personally, I feel that the “sharing” route loses a bit of its excitement, but having more choices isn’t necessarily a bad thing either. For example, imagine a scene where Sarah is secretly cheating while talking to or texting Alex at the same time—that would be quite thrilling. The creator also does an excellent job when it comes to designing temptation and erotic tension. Scenes like the boss giving Sarah a massage, or Sarah teasing in the fitting room, are especially well done. Not every moment needs explicit sex to be effective. For a creator’s first visual novel, this is undeniably a successful work. No complaints at all—keep it up.
I really liked the last scene with Neil🥵
Option C and D is the greatest for me. I like a good, proper NTR story, so my go-to option would be C. But many cuckolding relationships start after one of the partners cheating. So a correlation between C and D would be the most logical one I think. (Sarah cheating in the heat of the moment, keeping it going for a while, but finally telling Alex and settling on a more open relationship). Also I would like to say couple of things about some people here hating the NTR plot. I mean what is your expectation from a game that involves a married couple as main characters? Dev is a great person, so they are pushing to include all kinks possible. Please leave NTR lovers alone. There are only few quality games, and this is only just one of them. Please keep up the good work, and focus on what you are doing. We’ve already loved what you’ve done so far.
I agree mr fable your doing a great job keep it up looking foward to the next part of the story and your future projects
Keep up the good work Mr. Fable and try not to get dissuaded by all the negativity from a few self absorbed, wanna be writers that are butt hurt because the poll didn't go their way or because they didn't make the right choices. Public notice: This is a fictional story and on top of that it's porn!! Fictional porn whether written, animated or filmed is fantasy, not a documentary. It's built to stimulate, not to reflect real human behaviors, relationships or bodies. It may contain some realistic elements, but for the most part the content is exaggerated and scenarios accelerated to get to the stimulation that people seek in porn.
I actually like the idea of a dominant Sarah and a submissive Neil. Neil opens Pandora's box by "corrupting" Sarah and she becomes a run away train but he doesn't want to get off the ride. Most importantly though I don't want you to become overwhelmed trying to please everyone.
Subject: Canceling my subscription – Hard to stay invested in a narrative that lacks realism. "I’m decided to cancel my subscription and move on. Thank you for the journey so far, but I’ve lost interest in the game's current direction. As I’ve mentioned before, the lack of narrative consistency—especially regarding Sarah’s character—has become too much of a hurdle for my immersion. Watching an intelligent, mature woman offer zero resistance to blatant disrespect in a professional setting, without any clear leverage or psychological buildup, just doesn't feel organic. It feels like the character is being sacrificed for the sake of forced 'scenes.' I appreciate your hard work on the visuals, but for me, a compelling story needs a psychological bridge that makes sense. Best of luck with the future of the project."
Thank you for your support so far :)
Just Cheating is boring 😄
Subject: Is it just me, or is the lack of realism in Sarah & Neil’s dynamic becoming unbearable? "I honestly don't get the writing in the latest update. Neil’s behavior at the office is beyond 'bold'—it’s borderline nonsensical. Sending lingerie photos, groping her under the guise of a massage, and then straight up telling her to come in without underwear? The problem is Sarah’s reaction. She’s an intelligent, mature brunette, yet she just stands there blushing without saying a single word. There's no blackmail, no leverage, and no established psychological trauma—so why the silence? In a real-world setting, a woman like Sarah would’ve reported him to HR or slapped him across the face immediately. I’m all for the 'corrupting the housewife' trope, but it needs proper buildup. This forced submission without any actual stakes feels incredibly lazy and ruins the immersion. Does anyone else feel like the writer is skipping the most important part—the psychological bridge?"
You can avoid every Neil interaction you mentioned. The idea was that if you are not enjoying the attention from Neil you are not supposed to stand next to him during the meeting. If you choose to stand away from him the meeting will be more professional. And standing next to him is not mandatory to progress on Neil route. So only stand next to him if you enjoy his advances (She talks about this with the Therapist too, if she choose to stand next to him) The game will allow you to accept or reject anyone's advances. However what the game will not do is accept someone advances and let you respond negatively to that. That is because you were already given the chance to avoid it in the first place. For example if you accepted Eriks swimming lesson, it is assumed you will enjoy the physical contact with him. What the game will not do is let you slap him when he gets too close. This is because you already had the option to reject him and including that negative reaction once you have accepted his advances (for every possible path ) is going to take a lot of development resources and slow down the game too much. So if you don't like a particular interaction avoiding it is the way to move forward.
Interesting poll results huh. Damn. I love my fellow gooners
i love the silent majority lol. I like the poll results. The comments are hating on neil but the silent majority knows what they want lmao
depends of which one give the most MMF and gangbang scenes :)
"Neil hitting on Sarah in the office feels forced and awkward. He doesn't really add anything to the plot, so I'd rather see him cut from the story completely."
Dominant Neil, Dominant Alex, Submissive Sarah. Only route I need
I'm not at all a fan of femdom but in Neil's case I'm willing to make an exception. Any route that results in Neil humiliated, ashamed, and exposed to all would be a welcome route for me... especially if his female victims are the ones domming him. How's that for sharing? :D
Loved the update. Of course the NTR folks want cheating Sarah...shocker...🙄🤣 I don't like Neil. I know it has been expressed that some sort of sharing route would be fine as a tease (like the pictures and such, but Neil never gets what he really wants) or way to 'get back' at Neil (MC, Sarah, Eva set Neil up, blackmail him or something). I'd be ok with that. With that in mind, I would be intrigued with a dominant Sarah, neutral/sub Neil situation...🤔 Just a thought...🤣
Overall i feel the writing has really improved. The dynamic betw Alex and Sarah is much more plausible with dominant Sarah. Still one feels the intention to smoothen negative feelings (it's good that jealousy gets mentioned though). It would be even better if we could see some protest of Alex at some point, which gets rejected by Sarah. Also her dominant role could be better motivated. She could reflect more on the fact that she feels better herself being dominanted and now realizes Alex is not the right guy for that, resulting maybe in a little bit of contempt and mixed feelings. This would deepen the motivation and also connected her attitude tow Alex with that tow Neil.
To be clearer: Dominant Sarah tow Alex but submissive dow dominant Neil.
im more of a erik fan myself but i like the cheating aspect for sarah
Neil seems insistent on wanting her more than just sharing. I don't see a way for a good sharing or cuck route with him. Wish I could just ignore him xD
I like to think if Neil would go out with Sarah and share in all kinds of sexual pleasure on villas or yachts with rich people from the underworld and Alex is powerless to do anything.
So, is Neil going to be the focus from here on out? Or does Erik and the others still have play?
No this poll is just about Neil's route. Other routes are still there.
Wouldn't mind a cheating route with Sarah being dominant and yeah, I don't like Neil, he has zero redeeming qualities.
I might be on Neil's side if he were completely up-front with his intentions with Sarah but he's one of those slimy arsewipes who is totally incapable of being honest with anyone. If you have to use underhand methods to get a woman (including blackmail or coercion) just go and find the nearest bloody bridge and jump off it. Do yourself and the rest of the world a favour. You're an oxygen thief! :-D Other than Neil, I'm thoroughly enjoying the game and I like the fact that I can shut him out ... and, for the record, I have no problem with any of the other potential ... third parties. Incidentally, I have just seen Ninad Karekar's comment and find myself in complete agreement with him. I would love to see that spunk puffin, nonce grovelling at Sarah's feet.
No option got dominant Sarah submissive Neil
Maybe, I haven't thought about that.
wish there was an option Submissive Neil,Dominant Sarah,Oblivious Alex
No way Neil would be a submissive, he's the boss.
entonces ya quieren poner a sara infiel obligado!
I'll try Neil's content because I'm a completionist (and because Sarah is hot) but I don't like his type of character (he's done well here, so it's not a criticism in the slightest). I just need to figure out the best path for me to try it on, but I chose the bottom two options as I think a less dominant Neil is the best option for me - basically I won't give him power over Sarah (or Alex) if I can help it. Worst-case scenario, there's always the replay gallery!
I've played the Neil path as far as it goes but he's a slimy, smarmy nonce and it makes my skin crawl 🤣
Option b and d and fine with me