Just a few things: 1) Her genitalia looks kind of odd and uncanny, and I'm not sure if it's because of the lighting and shading or whether it's because she's so open and loose before all the actual sex. 2) I love the perspective of the scene being above a bed but the camera angle is strange with the black borders and the bottom of Atla's heels cut off by the image. Plus it's so low resolution. I feel besides those two things, it's a solid scene. I would have probably recommended drawing the actual edges of the bed so it doesn't look like a cropped white square. Also maybe the arms and hands of each man on Atla's knees. Just my suggestions.