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Thank you for responding. Now I understand better where you're at with the game novel, Julia YAD. I also appreciate and respect your preferences on what platform you prefer to work with. Again, Julia YAD is sexy, fun and stimulating, and we love the theme. Looking forward to the next chapter and updates. Keep up the good works! Cheers! - JB NYC -

Hi there! Here's my feedback and suggestions: The story line is sexy, fun and stimulating. Very well done! - However, I would like to suggest a few things to help you improve Julia YAD. First, #1) Loops: There are too many unnecessary loops / repeats in the game simply to make progress in your visual game novel. You can balance this a lot better to keep the story flowing for your audience, instead of the same thing looping over and over. That part is not fun and takes away from enjoying Julia YAD. - Second, #2) Julie Masturbating: It would be great if you added more of the people she has interacted with in the story line into her fantasies box when she pleases herself in bed. This would make it more relevant to her preferences and likes, which by the way, this part of the game novel is very sexy and stimulating. - Third, #3) The sex toys need a lot more love and interaction with Julia than just constantly clicking on them, and kissing one day and night lol. For example: Allow Julia to gradually start using the sex toys in bed when she masturbates, and in the shower, after a few days of being in the new apartment, and after Julia is told by Joey she can't remove them. Let this be another way for your users to earn naughty progress points for Julia when she uses sex toys. Also, switching it up a bit is always good, and allow her to test her limits with each sexy toy. This part of Julia YAD you can easily improve. * Lastly, you should consider creating your sexy game novel Julia YAD in RenPy as an additional platform option for your audience, which has better preferences, and save options, whereas the game engine you're using doesn't really have much flexibility there. For example: If your user/player wants to go back only a few scenes, your user/player cannot go back to those specific scenes using your current platform. The user/player has to go way back from the start of that entire main scene, which is a bit much. Also, the game save options are fixed and not flexible at all. This is very limited and not very appealing with Julia YAD. It only saves after each day she goes to sleep, instead of allowing the user to choose which part of the story / scene in the game they would like to save. It would be much more preferable in any AVGN to have these flexible game mechanics, which are standard options in the RenPy platform. * Finally, I wouldn't write this if I didn't like the story line and theme for Julia YAD, which is very sexy, fun and stimulating. So please don't be offended or take this as criticism, it is far from it. I am simply making suggestions to you for Julia YAD to improve the overall experience for your audience, my friend. I think you're doing a great job, but I also believe you can do much better. * As you can see, we even joined "Julia the Flirt" membership to give you our support, as we would like to see you succeed! :-) Either way, keep improving and keep up the good works. You have our support! Cheers! - JB NYC -