The game is growing — tell me what I’m missing

I don't think it's an oversight on your part, but still: Visiting Justin and Shelly on Sundays from 5 pm to 7 pm is in development. I think that implementing this development of the game would open up new possibilities. Because, let's not forget, so far Emma's only friends (or with a friendly attitude) have been Justin, Shelly, Jill and the beach painter. It would be interesting if Shelly and the beach painter (possibly Jill too) know each other from their "wild" youth

It's perfect how the game is going. In my opiniion, it's optional but only 1 thing is missing is Old Young. Such a quicky from old repair man and Emma

personalmente apprezzo molto lo stile del gioco, i dialoghi incentrati sulla definizione dei ruoli, mi piacerebbe che rimanesse in bilico fra Victor e Stevens in un rapporto di sottomissione verso i due ma forzata più dagli eventi che dal ruolo di sottomessa, mi piacerebbe una Emma imprevedibile, che passasse dalla sottomissione al dominare a seconda del momento

Well Congratulations to all the people at Novel, the First Chapter of the Game is Finally Officially on the Steam video game platform for $9.99 USD. Well done!

I'm cautious with suggestions as I have seen other great games collapse after the creator gave too much power to the subscribers. I have enjoyed the chemistry in the photo shoot and would like to see more. Emma has the potential to be a strong character and win at life, hopefully defeating or defanging the "Victors".

Non dare ascolto ai desideri dei giocatori, segui l tue eccellenti idee, altrimenti sarebbe fan-service e il gioco rischierebbe di perdersi. Continuate così!

I feel like Emma's friend, Maggie is a little under used. She could be used as an option to drop Emma's morality when she gets into situations like she did in Paris . Also think Dylan texts could continue for the same reason.

It seems like there may be a culture of sexual dominance throughout the executives of the company (Stevens, Victor). Id like to see some of the side/non-important unnamed female characters have more of those interactions Sophia's arc from submissive under Victor/Stevens to dominant over Emma (and maybe Jill) would be fun, but that may be more sex scenes just for the sake of sex scenes.

Well, the question for me is in which direction the relationship between Victor and Emme will turn, it needs more options to make the wrong (some would say the right) decision for Emma. Will she become a Mindbroken office slut Victor uses to gain what he wants from business partners, or will he make her his Slave, maybe she finds another path to leave Victor and joins porn industry or prostitution path or will she find the way back to her husband...

I'd like to see some of the placeholders get used. Unless I am missing something I feel like there are more to come shower scenes, balcony scenes, maybe add some more to the beach options that round it out. Not important to the story but definitely fun to try to find the little things with each update.

I would continue the Steven's story line with his interest growing in Emma ... and I would complete the decisions where "in development" exists as one of the options. I think that should be the first priority. I love the game, but I do find it a bit frustrating when "in development" is the option I most want to pick based on the type of Emma I'm creating in a particular playthrough. It's great work though, you've got a great story and interesting characters.

I’d like to see the side story continued with the other receptionist you can go to coffee with when you first start, I can’t remember her name, but I was really excited for Emma to have that option ☺️

Holiday events, If possible could also include more of the thought of being taboo and her feelings about it either the players can see her feeling a certain way, as in she knows its wrong but she is burning with desire I know its there alreay but more with other events.

In my opinion, Victor and his dominance are a mistake, because that risks making other options less obvious. As far as I’m concerned, Victor should be moved far away for now. It’s actually interesting to see how the couple’s relationship evolves toward options that are already taking shape. I’m also not very interested in hardcore scene solutions that come out of nowhere. In the bar, there are options involving stripping classes—to work as a go-go dancer and then as a stripper. The porn studio is also introduced too early—there are softcore options. But that’s just my opinion; I’ll leave the choice of scenarios up to the creator. This game has great potential, but it can quickly become tedious. boring. There are already a lot of characters, and I’m looking forward to seeing how it develops. Thanks for all the work you’ve put in.

Looking at the details in Steven's office. So much, so much. Same thing in other parts of the game. Is there a book missing on Steven's desk? I have no idea. I am now running 3 paths in this game. Two of those paths run double duty one part for Tyler and one part for Emma. Should Justin actually become a player in Emma's life, I would have 4 paths. But it looks like right now, he is simply the plumber guy and midnight comforter. It would at least for me compensate for missing sex with Justin for them to have more midnight talks. In my list of fantasies, plumbers with small rough edges make better lovers than business tycoons, what do they know about real life anyway? For most games, I simply make choices that seem like what I would prefer, once through. Done. I have no real interest is being a completionist most of the time. Could you be missing something? Oh, no doubt, you being a human genius. But I would have no idea. My main concern is to be sure I don't miss something.

1. Eating seems optional. I haven't found a consequence for not eating. 2. There are a lot of beautiful women at the firm. Victor seems to have no compunctions about banging the women around him and in inappropriate places. There should be more random indicators of that. But he devotes a lot of time to Emma. It would make her wonder why he's so special. 3. It seems the story line with Danny the texter (Maybe I got that name wrong) just went nowhere. Even if it's not developed into more, the texts should keep coming if she didn't block them. 4. As her connection to Tyler erodes, there should be some indicator of that in the interactions aside from few sex options. 5. She potentially chats with coworkers a lot. There could be friends there. (Same with the beach. If she's there often, other frequent beachgoers will recognize her) 6. There is a lot of mall not developed. 7. Agree with below, Emma has an astonishing lack of older connections like family or older friends. If a distance from other connections is contributing to her behavior, it should be revealed in the story somehow. 8. There are inconsistencies in Emma's (and Tyler's) redlines. She seems to have no problem walking around nude, but hesitates to remove her panties in the spin the bottle game. She is very comfortable being naked in front of that peeping neighbor, even letting him touch her, but then is reluctant everywhere else. It's immersion breaking when she's very open in one scene then becomes very much less so elsewhere. 9. She's taking nude selfies. Why not normal ones? And what is she doing with them?

Yea one thing decide the phone text. Or you can work the father in law angel or keep it ex boyfriend or college fling.

You’ve chosen a lot of options. It’s only natural for things to get complicated. Perhaps you could simply refocus for a while on the key points of the story. Still, it’s true that it’s all very absorbing. Courage

What's missing imo is a Emma's family to help keep her grounded. Empty room could be her mom or sister or Tylers sister or mom. Help keep them grounded while being a potential trouble maker too

Per ora non ho consigli da dare mi sembra nonostante le tue difficoltà come creatore dovute al reparto tecnico,che porta via energie a te,che tu abbia tutte le carte in tavola per un vero successo per le mani,al momento ho fiducia della tua creazione e forse sarebbe sbagliato tediarti di più,con sciocchezze,unico consiglio continua in questa direzione,la passione non ti manca, ci è stato dato un dono (la creazione) e mi sembra ti sia riuscito molto bene,magari più avanti.... ma dubito

One "side" thing you and many creators are forgetting is mentioning the name of the game in the posts. You have a good game and for you it is all you think about. I would love to play your game more, but I only get to it every 2 or three months. So there is no connection in my brain between the main girl's name, the creator's name and the novel's name. Would be nice if you could mention it in the title of the news or in a status line or so :) . But I have to admit, Victor rang a bell and put me in the right direction. So this guy does his purpose well. His game in Paris was nice. I was afraid that you really ment the cheap documents trick to ve believable, but you played it out nicely :) . About your question: Maybe add some nameless dudes that get a look or a grip once in a while. Maybe he trying to expose her or wanting her to prove her loyality. Not with some important guys, but with another redisent, a passer by, a guest in the bar. I really apprechiate the question, it is really rare.