Let’s criticize “Boundaries of Morality.”

Bonjour, de mon point de vue je fais entièrement confiance a l'équipe de Novel. Le début de l'histoire est très prometteur. Tout dois se mettre en place tranquillement et ne pas propulser Emma trop rapidement dans la "trahison". Une histoire comme celle-ci ne se fait pas à la vite, vite... On sait déjà tous quelle va succomber (ainsi que Tyler) à la lubricité. Le tous et de savoir comment et avec qui. Blackmail, sentiment, saoulée ou drogué, ambition etc.... Je suis sûr que l'on ne sera pas déçu. Je vois deux choses qui me turlupine : (échange entre couple- c'est pas trop mon truc mais il en faut pour tout le monde) et surtout le temps d'attente entre les mises à jour et la longueur de jeu des mises à jour. Je comprends qu'il ne faille pas bâcler l'excellent travail actuel, mais je ne veux pas attendre des semaines voir des mois comme j'ai déjà vu. Bomme chance pour la suite Novel

You should make it possible to change Emma's name, just like we can change the MMC's name.

Bonsoir, et merci pour votre dernière mise à jour, continuez comme ça c'est parfait. J'ai un souhait pourtant, laissez Emma avoir des rapports hors mariage dès que possible, avec Justin par exemple...

I know novel wants feedback. So give it to him what he is looking for dont be afraid. He wont be hurt with what you say

Generally I love this game. It felt like this game was a fresh breath into the adult game genre with beautiful animations, very nice renders and the beginning of a potentially hot story. Especyally the first few updates were really hot with lots of teasing (Justin, the old plummer etc.). Felt like the exitement dropped a bit after that, but I see the ned to progress the story and I agree that there needs to be a slow corruption before the cheating happens. As far as criticism goes I guess my comments would be regarding: 1) The sandbox feels unnecessary. It is a bit unclear what each choice does in terms of stat changes (corruption, building relationship with Tyler, gaining energy etc.) 2) There should be a comment explaining the images on the right of the screen. Fitness, etc. 3) In the sand box mode there should be something guiding you forward in terms of story progression. But bottom line, this is a very good game!

Finding it difficult to add to comments already expressed. My only observation is maybe too much positive relationship points to Tyler for doing housework. I would prefer the credit to other attributes such as morality, fitness etc. It is my observation that partners tend to expect these actions without credit, are not very observant and only complain when things become obvious (piles of unwashed clothes, rubbish all over the floor etc). They only give credit when it is obvious, or it saves them a job (repainting fence, fixing shower).

the game dynamics are little confusing... all the icons need a little info on them as to what they are... story and progress is great... the animation and graphics are the best... all the best for future...

To this point I have a very positive outlook on this project. The art is fantastic. The story thus far is good, though a bit jumbled. a bit too much going on, however some of that may just be the release schedule as we are not seeing a completed project yet. I do like that your vision for the Dom in your story is a decent looking older gentleman and not some ridiculously old decrepit pervert or fat bastard. A true Dom should be someone she wants to serve willingly, not forced into. Would be very interesting to see her as a married woman have to choose if she wants to be collared by another man.

I think I agree with Baddoggy008. Tool tips are needed when you put your mouse over the 3 circles on the right of the screen. Also put them on the "Conditions" the pictures are good but it will remove any possible misunderstanding. I find it very odd that you sometimes talk as different people. took me a while to work out what was going on but more than that. I dont really understand why you are doing it. I would find it much more immersive to only be Emma or Tyler. Far too soon for me to talk about story or how the stats affect what you can do, not a huge fan a stat blocking but I understand if if it makes sense. That last point is a very personal thing.

Don't think I have anything technical wise, icons all interact fine, no delay or appear unresponsive etc, overall everything that way. One thing I've seen commented on is the three blue icons and it not explained what those are, I know what they are, seemed obvious but I think having a description when you hover over for instance could be good. Story wise I'm fine with it, the build-up between Liliana is being paced as it should, weird if that was rushed, same with Samantha (although she maybe should be more pushing for Tyler, as its clear she likes him), on the main character front Emma, maybe a few choices as someone else suggests, won't repeat but when I played again I saw his point. To be fair I'm happy to see how things go, don't know your vision for it as a whole, so can only comment once we get more, then things can be critiqued I guess, so far it's been fun, stick to the plan dude

wonder if your mod from F95 is here too and will ban me for a month here too for “constructive criticism “ all I said was that I wish Emma got about 80% of the screen time to 20% for husband and that I don’t like forced husband sex scenes, should be optional to skip it, but honestly I do like your game and think it’s very good

Here is what ive seen - some are mine and some are what ive seen others talk about 1) not sure what emma’s actual job is - the talk she has with tyler is an assistant manager . If she is only manning the phones and desk until a promotion the actual job is receptionist. So a bit confused on that 2) the shower scene with justin - was a bit early in game but understand why it was done 3) i am a fan of free roams in games many others are not . Why was the free roam done instead of just choices at points in the game and is there anyway to have it in the very beginning of the game so folks are not surprised when it appears after the prologue? 4) there needs to be more discussion between tyler and emma after the shower and bar events it clears up too quickly 5) agree with rob that tyler is a bit all over the place . Need to show him consistently either being controlling and jealous or anxious and afraid . He seems to be a mix of those 6) and like ive said the skirt lifting at the opening is over the top no ceo would ask that but i also understand why you did this Now as for choices i see a few other points where there should be choices - 1) when vicktor touches her to confront or not and that would stop or continue the path 2) to go or not go to the bar with justin . Just asking to go home stops that corruption path with him 3) telling the photographer that oil is not allowed or is allowed

Some of the animations are jarringly edited - it feels like slightly different angles have been stitched together. It's not a big deal but gives the game a slightly rougher feel.

I'm struggling to find anything to complain about yet. I'm a big fan of female protag games (I know this both). I'm a massive fan of NTS but, when we're dealing with female protag games I'm a quite the fan of NTR and cheating too. I've seen the criticism of Tyler but I'm not sure that it's entirely justified. It's not uncommon for a man to be controlling and, at the same time, to try to act the 'modern man' who gives his wife the freedom she needs and deserves. Of course he can be annoying but, without him being annoying, the story suffers ... and there's no incentive for wifey to play away. I'm also interested to see where the thing with Emma's boss goes too. I don't see him blackmailing or coercing her. I imagine him being a lot more subtle than that so that it ends up being her who makes the first move but hey! What do I know? I'm not the one writing the story. Sorry. I'm rambling because I can't actually find anything at this stage to criticise.

My criticism is Emma isn't a total slut yet, and that's just unacceptable. Only joking lol I don't have any complaints at all:)

As I've mentioned before, just stick to your vision and try not to please everyone. The only critique I can think of is I do not understand the point system. Do points in stamina, etc. make any difference? They seem more like place holders for now. It seems rather unpolished at this stage. Now, if you have a grand vision and purpose for the points, cool, but maybe provide more detail in how they will work in the future.

I haven't played any of your other games and, as of right now, I don't have any notable complaints. A minor one might be the way some of the characters act after certain events. The wife and husband seem to have made up a bit too easy for me after what happened with Jake (I think that's his name). But that's not a big gripe, just a minor one. The story is still in the early stages so I'm interested in seeing what options are available to further the storyline. Overall, I'm happy with what you're doing. Cheers to your efforts

If these guys are going to cheat on each other I want credible reasons for them to do that. These are not horny teenagers. If they reconcile later, it should be because they have honestly talked about the situation, why it happened, and how to be more satisfying emotionally to each other. You have made the point that nothing is lacking for them in the sex department. LI's outside the marriage should at least be solid long term affair candidates.

I think the animations etc are fantastic but I dislike the personality of the husband of the main character. I think he comes across as really controlling one minute then too dismissive of his jealousy the next.

Please don’t worry—be direct and honest. Believe me, this is a normal discussion, and I’m genuinely interested in your feedback.