Ok

Pls add chastity cage scenes too. It would go really well

While the adult content might have decreased, I'm all in for the story. The Akemi path and Ayaka path are both welcome departures from the usual NTR/NTS cliches and I couldn't be happier for them. I prefer either of them over the Lust path.

There's very little streaming happening in a cuck hentai game called My Girlfriend's Streaming Career. The game is now trying to be some melodramatic K-drama.

I think everything you're doing is great. I personally wouldn't mind more branches as I was curious what Ota's master plan to steal Mio away was, and it kind of just shifted away from that. The new way the story is headed in the cuck path with the blue haired girl, also has some interesting possibilities. Having Ayaka make Mio do more things like things different guys, keep things from Yamato, or even making Mio break the rules with Ota or different guys could be fun to read/see. You could keep your writers for that path and then use your style for the original paths. Just thoughts from a fan. Just remember, there's always going to be different opinions about everything going on in the story, because different people are looking for different things. Do what you think is best. You can't please everyone. Unrelated, I have an idea for a different ntr game if you'd be interested in hearing it.

Please toss & remake the chapter overview, making it simpler/clearer/not involving scrolling would male a world of difference when it comes to.keeping track of the stories.

Yeah I don't care about ota at all. Don't want his back story. He is just there to fuck mio

Finally, one of the writers fought with me few updates back when I called out how bad the cuck route was and akemi route being inconsistent to the lore. I basically stop playing the updates after that and just kept my subs as a support. It's shows they never listen to criticism and seeing cuck path becoming even worst and akemi path is trending the same line. I'm glad that you are writing again Viviny, I'll most likely check out the update you write when it comes out

When we gonna have updates in the cosplay arc? Its really promising!

I know one got a lot of feed back in this post but truthfully you should add some flair and player autonomy, maybe like side branches of each path could fo you justice. I know personally I’d love to see an impreg route on the cuck path but there’s so many options you could roll with

Maybe this is a good opportunity to create small mini routes—for example, a short route where Mio is actually Akemi.

I think we shouldn't add any more characters otherwise that will make less content for existing characters like aiko

Ever thought of adding animation?

Very excited to see where all these routes go tbh Ayaka just adds more intrigue to me, maybe there could be two endings of that branch 1 where Mio breaks the rules and hard NTR and one where Mio follows the rules and the three become in a master and subs relationship. Akemi is also great for the “Is it Mio is it not?” Thing. Just need to add a lil more sex and we’re golden hehe but I get sex and lore balance is important 🫶🏼

Thank God, it was going nowhere without your undivided attention. Build-ups are supposed to have a pay-off, not just chain into other build-ups for eternity. I just hope the writers actually take a break and revise their game-plan, not just fooling around and coming back to dish the same unwanted food.

Glad to see this. Honestly consider a rewrite poll or fork on the 0.29 or 0.30 update, to get this blue hair girl thing out of the story. Mio was escalating finally into “streaming career”, into “risky girl”, into “other guys other than Ota”, and all this was hinted at as a possibility just to be discarded. Lesbianism was totally random. Just let Mio slip into bad girl mode and roll with it instead of backing off every turn and adding random filler. It feels the writer keeps trying to outsmart the reader with not making the story go where it seems like where it is going, and this is fine sometimes, it’s a twist. But every time is a derail, and this is a train wreck of randomness more and more. The key words are: Mio, escalating streamer, more lust, exhibitionist, less control, more risk, some breaking sometimes but not right after every slip of Mio. Stop trying to outsmart every time, it’s not a twist of the wheel it’s a train wreck with this many. Elements are mentioned and useless for too many chapters, execute earlier after hinting. Stop trying to outsmart, it has become filler.

I'm just a rando on the internet, and you're the one making this art. A lot of people have already stated what's been going on with the story, but that doesn't mean it's not interesting. We're here to fap overall, and in my opinion, this game is top-tier and should set the bar for what other games should do. Consistent updates, quality imagery, and a plot. It went from there, only being the MC's imagination being the only H-scenes, to one really good H-scene that actually depicted the cuck path well, to a direction that doesn't quite fit. I guess what I'm getting at from my ramblings is that, as an audience, we finally got what we were looking for, and our candy was just taken away. For the Akemi arc, I'm enjoying the progression, and I like girl-on-girl action (who doesn't?), but I don't think that should be the main vision of it. I would like to see Akemi take the reins and show Mio the way in this arc, and who knows- maybe that's the overall goal for it. A three-way between the two girls and Ikky would be hot. Love your work, I respect the commitment to it. I know it's hard to take criticism and negative feedback after so much time and effort is put into this to have a finished product produced bi-weekly. I know I would burn out. Above all, I'm interested to see what direction you, the writer, bring us to. Good luck for the future (not that you need it, it was already good)

Do what ya gotta do, I'm on board regardless. I've like the updates felt like the reduction in adult content was balanced by the crazy frequent releases!

This is not meant to be an insult but an actual observation. The story updates lately seemsnlikenits been written by AI. Its all over the place now. Its supposed to be a simple NTR story about a streamer girl, now there's a long lost twin sister, a blue haired chick who suddenly is acting like the main character, etc etc.

Please more on the cosplay path 🙏

Is there a timeline or plan for also working on the other branches? There's many of us that also interested in Akio's paths (Camgirls, "revenge"). Please consider a calendar schedule that furthers those paths every other update or after two updates. Having Akio "Mommy" Yamato or even "Mommy fuck" Yamato would really put a spin on things. As for the current stories, I'm enjoying the ride despite some of the patreons/community wanting their sex scenes. Why? 1) It's the relationship & everyday life, not sex, that makes its relatable for the player. Fucking a bull is just one step above masturbating with a dildo that has a man attached to it. Reclaiming each other is just a mental perspective/attitude about commitment to each other & refreshing their emotional bond. 2) Folks don't realize how much space the images are taking up in this image-heavy VN. (Please consider using a PNG optimizer for better lossless compression unless test show the gains aren't worth it.)

While the lewd content has somewhat decreased, the writing and story did progress quite well... Blue Haired girl added a twist to the NTR route thats making me wonder what will happen, and if it was really Ikky with Mio in the akemi path or it was another misunderstanding. SO far, the Akemi path is the one i like the most

Tambien opino lo mismo, incluso la ruta de cosplay y camgirl son buenas y se han dejado de lado, el hecho de que la identidad de ayami fuera secreta le daba un plus, pero ahora todo es sentimentalismo, incluso el mismo nombre de streamer ya no se ve reflejado aqui, siento que perdió todo ese impacto, el juego es bueno y siempre espero cada actualización, de hecho es el unico que de verdad me encanta, espero que todo mejore y puedas darle ese giro que todos esperamos, muy buen trabajo! PD. Ojala metas bastard ugly o algun tipo de blackmail en alguna ruta por ejemplo en cosplay por favor!

"The audience doesn't know what they want until they get it." Absolutely on board for new situations and consequences, but particularly for an audience this niche, it can be alienating to receive a product so far afield from what's on the cover. It seems most of us are expecting an empathetic, sexualized psychodrama, but the last few updates have given us a sudden, unrealistic ensemble that doesn't immediately relate to our core pair or established triangle. Too many new, out-there characters and circumstances that aren't connected to the behavior and decisions of the principle cast. As it stands, this unmoors the whole narrative. It feels we've sacrificed story convention, character realism, and emotionality for cheap titillation and forced scenes. (Which can be fun!) But between the 'secret twin sister' and the 'deus ex domme,' we've entered full melodrama. There's definitely a place for this, but it's not supported by our premise or our characters. Part of this could be that we haven't received any internal motivators for the supporting cast. I understand wanting to hide the truth and delay the reveal, but the 'fog of war' is much too thick at this point to ultimately care about who's accomplishing their goals. Excited for more routes with sexy, naive couples getting in way over their heads. Hope we're all still having fun. Thanks for a good time so far.

I kinda got lost with all these new characters.

I really appreciate all of the work, content, and the quality the writers have been providing. Thank you. Telling a story just two blocks at a time while being expected to cram some kind of meaningful sexual development into each release is quite a feat to master. I feel like is some kind of lesson here, maybe something about teasing the content over the story. When the story is clear the reader anticipates and enjoys the teased sex content. When the story is teased, the reader is left confused and anxious about the direction. The sex content falls flat because the reader doesn't understand the story well enough to see how the sex progresses character development. I don't know if that's really the case, just kinda what I'm pulling from it on reflection.

To be honest new characters are really confusing the story + boring ' loosing intrest and the same goes for her sister, route akemi . It's really confusing what is going on.

Glad to hear it. I hope that something can be done to get the cuck path back on the tracks, because it really is/was fantastic overall. Can easily be salvaged and made great.

Well the adult content on certain paths can we enriched in my opinion by changing the pov. For example in ther cuck path we saw a little on how Yamato had the video call with Mio getting it on with Ota, in the next update it would have been good if we saw that in more detail from Mio's pov then continued the story, that way you have more adult content but that's only my opinion. Also I noticed a problem, the gallery doesn't show all the new images

You do good work and so do they. Everyone needs a break and your fairly consistant so no complaints viv

Hey Viv. What you need is a Script Supervisor (Continuity Supervisor). Someone who reads the story and makes sure that the continuity, feel and narration is going in the direction that you want. You need someone to look stuff over and say "This doesn't feel right for the story" or "this is good and is going in the correct direction". They're sole job is to make sure everything is flowing in the right direction.

Personaly i like the story, Just seeing Mio getting rail by Ota in every patch was getting really repetitive and dry. But i think is important that different Path give different content, i really like the Blue girl so dont cut her... but maybe is better if she is protagonist in a different Path or branch.

I think its more that the story to us the readers and consumers is moving away from what we feel the path is taking I currently like the akami path up until it becomes lesbian content and actually got a huge kick out of thinking ikky boned mio instead of akami and would live it if that was played on for the ntr/nts push as mio delves more into exhibitionism. However for the cuck path its unclear what the goal with the blue haired girl is. Im not asking for spoilers on the writing but whats her objective to the story? If its to piss off mio into fully cheating with ota...admit it. Ok it spoils the base narrative of the story but we still have to read it to find out how it happens how it works and im not against it. The porn content is ok as we get deeper connections to the characters but I feel its more the community is not seeing the vision and an update from the writers of these arcs on what the goal for that path is would be nice and help us understand where they want to drive the story. Im just personally lost on the cuck arc and not really here for lesbian stuff unless its to cuck yamato and the whole premise of akami inadvertently provoking mio into scandalous scenarios like with ikky in her sexy underwear was phenomenal trajectory. In short if we dont see the vision post an update to clear up the discontent and maybe place a poll on if the story should fork into a different direction. As right now I think a lot of people would ask to fork the blue haired girl into a cuckqueen route seeing as we dont see the CUCK vision here anymore. If im wrong please someone disagree with me lol

It's all excellent and the new story direction is definitely interesting but I'm glad to hear focus will shift a bit closer to lewd

I mean, it's not like the game isn't enjoyable anymore, I'm way more invested now than monts ago... But it's still cool to take feedback into account!

I actually think this is the right move, new writers are good too but I miss your writing Viv!

❤️

Oh so only 2 chapters next update?

Thanks for the hard work! all of you made a great deliver, can be hard to fullfill everyone at the same time, but best of luck! looking forward to next update.