MC's changes
I've done some corrections. Look what we have now.
BEFORE / AFTER
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you should add scene while she siting on his hand he rub her puss
Yes, looks better as but he also looks a bit younger. Guess it means the older sister's very long narrow face what makes her look 30ish wont get updated. It looks like that only bugged me. :(
Лучше чем было определённо, но выражение лица всё же немножко какое-то удивлённо-глуповатое... может можно что-то более волевое, уверенное
You can correct the hairline
Yes, the face is thin, not fat, as before. Much better now, Alex!
Maybe you could change something on his facial expression? For me he looks a bit sad, scared, unconfident? I don’t know. Or is it a portion of the story?
I think he has no reasons for happy now)
it's better now :)
He looks a bit younger now, but the face is better than before. Not that is was bad, but the change is good, I guess.
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