August Week 4 Weekly News

* Most characters look good but there are no edge cases or muscly bodyguards but just rather girly men. Even the good looking girls feel kinda wrong because there is no comparison point. * clothing, makeup etc picks for sex scenes are nice. + Renders are good quality + Videos are not that bad they could use polish but not bad. - Way too much gun violence and stupid action scenes that dont work in novels. Silly guns and all girls are rambo which is huge crap load. Running and gunning in latex. How they fire like they dont hit anything. Camera angles dont show what they are trying to shoot at but its like its gun pipeflash porn. - Too many tracked characters and sex scenes. I mean the renders are good but visual novel gets ruined by too many side tracks. The story should be narrated through the MC so it holds together. - All sexual relations are like DOM that DOM this. It really flats the BDSM theme. It also makes somewhat confusing cases where oen character been subbing for most of novel and then suddenly she is dildoing mens arses. - I know its fiction and all that but it tries to fit in modern world hence "futa" sounds wrong. Rather explain such case like "xx takes her dick". - Because all what happens the story really feels split in bad sense. Even Maraya is kind of the rival but it jumps too much between the characters. Its not that Maraya side is bad it just feels too much. It could be DLC or optional content that you could skip or something. - I understand its also story aspect to have dark environment BUT it feels too much when there is no contrast. Only at the mid-end part of the novel there is few palms and sunlight. I know the development is still early so you could change stuff but well. You would like me as customer in steam if you did not change stuff. I would redeem the novel in mid way because the gun porn and story that is just too spread.