Episode 1.18.1P available to everyone!
(This is the free version. If you're a patron, get the enhanced version here.)
Hi guys! Here's episode 1.18.1P, "Weekend Warrior".
This is a short episode. For story pacing reasons, we needed to send the heroine back into the club between Girls' Night Out and the next planned episode.
Please let me know what you like and what can be improved. This episode also has a new feature, two Illustrated Sex Scenes, starring three of the bargirls from the last episode. This is an experiment, please let us know what you think, here and on Discord!
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Comments (4)
Quite liked the illustrations, but I think I prefer just the text and avatar. Lets you paint your own picture of the scene. Also before this release the last time I played was maybe 1-2 years ago. About when the mind control stuff was pulled, the Malaysia part was new and pathed the way forward. There was all the school/uni stuff and the Scotland "prep" in local clubs. I have to say while those older parts were good I really like the changes and the way this has gone. I'm quite invested in the main story and the scenes are hot. But I'm probably in the minority here when I say I prefer the focus remain on the story. Devilfish and general spying it self. It seems likely the protagonist will end up being a bargirl and the sex scenes escalating, her getting unrealistically into it. And potentially the game becoming more and more about that. Personally I would prefer the kind of 50/50 balance we have seen so far. She's there for Devilfish, she has to keep doing things she doesn't like, she may need to make more difficult choices to avoid being a bargirl, having negative consequences on her (or others), but she pulls it off. I hope she doesn't just become a sex crazed maniac as generally happens in adult games.
I loved the illustrated sex scenes. They add a lot. Three other thoughts: 1) Now that it seems likely the main character will become a barmaid soon, I hope she has to return to the medical clinic for an exam of her own. After seeing how grody it was, having a scene with her on the exam chair, doctors looking at her pussy while one of the madames is there as a 'chaperone' has a lot of potential for humiliation. Especially if they're talking in Thai about the possibilities for piercings and tattoos as well during the exam. 2) I liked the main character's musings about being bossed around by an 18 year old at work. I hope that gets developed more, especially once she becomes a barmaid. Having an 18 year old 'Big Sister' would be a great dynamic to explore. 3) After the discussion with the base over her reports, and the promises she'll be extracted before having to become a barmaid, I like that she's now being set up to basically have to beg and advocate for herself to become a barmaid to avoid being fired.
Illustrations are a great addition, excellent writing as always.
It sounds really amazing and I think this should definitely be one of the most exciting episodes.