Thoughts on Chapter Two

Greetings loyal patrons, no I should say friends. It's been a while since the Chapter Two release and sadly it wasn't received very well. While a bit demotivating, it also highlighted a valid failure on my part.

I had stated that NTR was avoidable in Chapter Two, when in fact I failed to make that happen. I guess I was too eager to get to the meat and potatoes of the corruption of Amanda. I am going to fix this by adding more choice elements to Chapter Two.

This means that I have to add more dialogue, scenes and renders to the story. This will impact Chapter Three heavily as there will again need to create alternative dialogue, scenes and renders to that.

This being the case; Chapter Three will now be delayed until the rewrite of Chapter Two is completed.

Chapter Three is, as I have said before, an extension of the story and is not connected to the AVN created by NTR Games. Chapter Three is my own work and is designed to make the transition from WHID to the main story "Shaddolands" . I say this to avoid any confusion.

I know there will be frustration and for this I apologise. I don't have a team, so everything is created by me, which is why things take so long.

Ok I'm burbling now, so I'll wind this up now. Shortly I will post a Poll with some questions that will help me guide the story in the future. I just need to think of what questions to ask.

Take care everyone and thanks for your support, it means everything to me.

Shaddo

PS here are a few renders from Chapter Three that won't get changed.