Dark Science #37 - The Parting

I personally love character growth and transitions in stories, I watched "7 Years in Tibet" and I love how the main character changes from start to finish. I could see the same both with Vonnie growing out of the bureaucracy, and Kimmy fining a more human/emotional side. But I love a good story that unravels with good surprises, I love the ride. Thanks for all the hard work!

Really like this twist of events, it kind of shows you how far Vonnie is "brainwashed" into the system. It also reminds me that she is infact Ron's sister and that they both share a kind of "madness" or obsession. not really in the same aspect but like Ron is obsessed with making movies his way, Vonnie is obsessed with following the rules and structure of Nephilopolis... hm, the're kind of like yin and yang I suppose. I might just be rambling but this is what struck me. Keep up the good work! :D

I might do a comparison of Vonnie all done up and her more or less undone. She looks like another person, though her features are the same. It's wonderful seeing people in states.

**head explodes**