A Hero's Rebirth Ch. 05
My editor has finished helping me with the editing on Chapter 5, so here you go! I hope you enjoy it! As I said, I went directly into writing the next chapter, and am already over 6,000 words and 16 pages into the next chapter. I hope you enjoy it as much as my editor did.
If you find any mistakes that my editor and I missed, feel free to shoot me a message and I'd be happy to fix it before it goes up on Literotica. Both my editor and I are human and we miss things. So thanks for just enjoying what I am creating!
A Hero's Rebirth Ch. 05 link:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/10JUEeYfeB2SOEzalXfOwcPGvmWaVeca9sucDzAOiuSM/edit?usp=sharing
Comments (4)
This chapter is now published on Literotica. It looks like it took three days (and a little bit) to go from submission to published. So you all got access more than a days before anyone else.
Glad you guys like it! I've submitted it to Literotica now, and we'll see how long it takes them to review it. "Too Good To Be True Ch. 28" was submitted on the 3rd, and just got published this morning. It's hard to tell if they actually read my stories or if they just to weird searches for keywords before deciding to approve or reject stories, but it seems to take days regardless. I think this is the longest thing I've ever submitted to Literotica, so I'm curious to see how long it will take them to review it. Also curious how many pages it is on Literotica. Regardless, I thank you all for your encouragement and support as I create these stories. You don't know how much it means to me.
Great story, loved every minute of it. Hella excited to see where this story goes.
Incredibly well done. You told a significant story within your story -- this is perhaps one of your best, most cohesive chapters. It had the arc of a novel in a chapter. Your writing has improved in great bounds. Many of your stories are episodic, but with A Hero's Rebirth, you have gone beyond mere episodes and have embraced the grand epic. I am impressed. Please keep up the fantastic work.