What Happens in the Dark Ch. 06
This chapter is as ready as it is going to get. Be gentler with me than Steven is with his women, a have a volunteer who is still helping me edit, but I'm still working on a more permanent solution.
PDF is attached and here is the Google Docs link:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1b8YpcevIiM4ayUMtwXxgOi5LOJtENVe8QtgbF3L0CnQ/edit?usp=sharing
Comments (2)
I have to say that this story is even more twisted than art. I love it. It contains everything I abhor, but for some reason, I just keep reading. Well done.
Oh, I would absolutely HATE Steven in real life. Dark fantasy is about being able to fantasize about the darkness you would never really want, and would never participate in (willingly) and do it in a safe and controlled place. Part of the appeal is you can see each side and relish the forbidden pleasure. ...And it will always have to be pleasurable, if I'm posting on Literotica. Their rules about non-consent stories just get worse the longer you think about them. They literally say, you can write the most twisted and graphic rape scene you want, just make sure the victim survives to have trauma, and enjoys it, so she feels like a dirty whore afterward for enjoying being raped. Like in the first chapter, of What Happens in the Dark, I initially wrote that he took her virginity and deflowered her before she woke up in the dungeon, then got to all the things that he did to her (with the obligatory orgasms to show she was enjoying it) but they rejected it. She had to enjoy each and every act he did to her, including being deflowered, because it was a rape scene. Blows my mind. That is the victim blaming mentality: "It's okay, because she enjoyed it." But yeah, this series is twisted dark fantasy, and I actually really enjoy writing it. Though I will say, if you every THINK about doing something stupid like this... write a chapter or two of it, and think IN DEPTH on how everything can go wrong. Boy, nothing takes the sexy out of a fetish like this faster than thinking in depth on the consequences and repercussions.
