Bonus chapter and fireside chat!
hellloooo
It did so good! O.O
So, as I always do with major projects. let's talk! Here is a place for comments and questions cocnerning the Comic+ animation. I do consider them a single project, just presented in different ways.
Because of it's success, I would like to keep telling the Rave Rp's story this way. Alternating with fanart comics I still plan on doing. With Levi's story told, I now move on to Sword Maiden X Rias, and then continuing the OC story 100% translate from the RP, which is why you get that there bonus chapter. It was the original ending, but I didn't want to detract from Levi's story. So I figured if it was successful, I'd go ahead and post it as a preview for the next. <3
So please please please help me. What was cool, what did you like, with both the comic and animation. It's an awesome compromise between telling the story as is and then also doing an NSFW component that was a TON of fun to do.
So, as I stated. I will focus on just some regular packs for a little while. I am fucking spent. So this week ( I normally skip a week after I post, but because I took such a long break I will not be skipping this week!) I have a yuri fanart pack then brand new OC femalexmale pack!
Speaking of, Lilith and Trinity will be joining the cast in regular rotation. :) So you can expect to see them more!
The OG 6 are my heart and soul because they kicked off this thing, so they will still get more content than Lilith and Trinity, but this way we can have more friends, more "what ifs" more fun stuff!
And as always, feel free to ask and comment for anything else as well! Keep it civil and respectful, as always. And I will try to be as active as possible to answer questions.
And thank you, for liking Levi's story. >.< I have rambled and ranted so much I'm not going to inundate you here with it. Just, thank you.
Comments (18)
Loved everything, keep doing what you do
Really enjoying the stories and lore thst you created for these charcters, introduce new charcters, and art work. I know you mention some people were upset because it didnt have sex in it and I find that is a stupid thing to be upset about. I look forward to more chapters, music and art, im proud to support your passion
You already know how I loved the comic. The animated again was also chiefs kiss too lol. I have been sitting on how can I help in any way to critic my thoughts. But honestly youre doing such a phenomenal job Levi. And if you're having a blast making/creating/va work. All just spectacular. Sorry im being such a fan boy lol 🙏🌹
the comic was a really good read, got to know more about levi as well as the other people (especially the goat Alexander) and animation was really fluid and good voice acting (although it must’ve been mad embarrassing) but as a whole good job
Great work! I cant wait till the next chapter of the story along side all the NSFW stuff you will cook up for us thank you !
Oh damn, setup for the second RP comic, love it😁. The only thing I can point out from the comic was small grammatical errors, think I noticed 2 or 3. Other than that, I felt the pacing was good, art was very consistent throughout, the other RP OCs were great, would love to get more Tobi and Miho side stories. Nothing further to add to the animation than I already commented on. Looking forward to Trinity and Lilith added mischief.
There are 2 grammatical errors I know of that I saw *AS* I was uploading that made me sink down in my chair and go 'fuck it, we ball' because I woulda had to go back to the PSD file and edit it, then re Levi things to it, and then replace it. I was so tired man. >.< Ill do better next time though.
Comic -It was long but personally I have zero complaints about the length. Gave us a chance to learn the origins of Siren, the growth and internal turmoil she faced than the leading cause that 'created' Levi. -The pace of the story was great, not too long on one piece (knowing that you still had to cut some out from the OG RP I'm sure) -if I had to think of a negative point it would be the scenes that go from super clean to the grain/fuzzy effect that I assume is unavoidable sometimes when AI is involved. (Correct me if I'm wrong please.) Or the odd one letter spelling mistake. Animation -Beautiful, fluid, and at times, hilarious. -VA is on point and I mean that in the sense it is sounding continuous and matching character mouth movement. One direct comment to you though would be, have more faith in yourself. You were worried it wouldn't do well but God damn you crushed it, like always. So trust in your skill and view of what a masterpiece is because it's working. Oh yeah, one more thing, the doctors hand in one slide seemed to have two thumbs I think it's a scene with his right hand is up and he is talking to the crew through comms. Keep up the hard work!!
BLUD it was 336 pics Im just surprised i didnt fuck up more often haha. It was such a chore to edit and as I went on I was soooooooo tired. Ill take more time next time tho since I learned a lot. I had *zero* faith that anyone would like the story. None. So I am taken aback and very happy. And I will do the next with confidence and faith that I can do it justice and entertain everyone.
The comic, loved the pacing of it. A good mixture of character lore, world lore, and action. Which made it enjoyable to read. The animation, pure fire! The voice acting, animation, it all flowed together seamlessly.
Oh shiiiiiit!!! Selena is descending into battle! I get that it would’ve detracted a bit from Levi’s story, but the original Tetran ending could’ve worked as an “after credit/comic scene” that is setting up the next OC-RP comic. But then again, just the simple notion of Levi destroying the boundary would’ve/should’ve clued ppl in that the Tetran’s are inc. Other than that, you know my thoughts on both your comic and animation :D I fully appreciate that you’re doing this at all! It’s so much fun reading and watching what you’ve all done for a decade before deciding to share with us :) I guess if I do have one question. Will we ever get to see where Levi learned Spanish? XD for the life of me I couldn’t see anything in the comic while you used it in the animation ;)
there is a thing i am doing that ties into it and i will not elaborate cause that would ruin da fun haha.
I've not been able to read your Origin Story because I've been really sick 🤕. I was able to watch a glimpse of the animation, though, and I can say it was great. I'll probably come back when I'm feeling better and leave some proper feedback. In the meantime... congratulations!
hope you feel better soon I was sick recently and just fortified my couch for like 3 days not moving. D: No bueno
So will there be more origin stories or were those kinda already touched on in the who we are comics?
Ps i have more to say and comment on but it wont be done till later as im still at work lol
I loved the animation, it was fluid, the voice acting was great (I suppose it was supper awkward to record) and I liked how it was non linear. For the comic I was amazed at all the lore behind the character. I wasn’t expecting such stories when I subbed and it is very welcome surprise. I would love to see more comics like that from the girls, detailing more or their evolution. Wouldn’t mind same quality animations form the too 😝. Overall I’m glad you took such an enterprise and can’t wait to see more
I would *love* to do canon animations but omfg I need to chill and finish the music video before I go off on wild tangents haha.