OC comic chapter 1 "Oreo"
IT'S DONE.
So i didn't exactly take the weekend off lmfao. I DID have a fuckton of fun at the concert to the point of tears, and I wanted to get this done ASAP riding the high I was on.
So, here it is. It's about half the size of "What we couldn't say", and that's about what I was expecting. The OC comic is a little more reigned in and serialized as an ongoing story so it will function differently and also be a faster turnaround.
I will do a fireside chat for this one just like I did Yor X Marin. We can talk about what worked, what was cool, if you liked the format blah blah.
OH, there are two zip files. One is the comic, one is JUST the NSFW portion of the comic WITHOUT TEXT. I decided to do that because there are text overlays on a lot of the NSFW pics, and this way you can have both the comic, and also the NSFW without the text if you want it.
In light of the fact, I didn't take this weekend off lmfao I will just take next weekend. Works for me, it's Sabine's b-day next weekend and this way we can have a big fun party for her. xP She's my roommate IRL if you're not in the know and the other girls are all close by. I MIGHT do a fun like birthday card thing for her as well, where I add all the comments from this here patreon for her. If I do, it'll be it's own post so just make sure to check in!
I hope this is funny and also sexy. I had fun making it, especially writing the dialogue going back and forth with the other girls in text and discord like it was a regular part of the roleplay. : )
Enjoy! And I will be around.
Comments (21)
Eh... where to begin.... Seduced Avalon by stalking? O.O Cold, Scared, alone, and a little horny? >_< Natural Disaster... hehehe... Leaving people Wet!? Romantic narcissist who enjoys her "Research"! How to heat up in a Cold lab... How romantic! 😅 And Amina has definitely been spit-shining something! 😆 I love how Avalon's face rides Levi, and Levi returns the favor by ass riding the unknown 3rd guy, and Avalon returns the favor to her at the same time. 💕 Something about it is just so openly accepting and shows one’s intimate desire for another. It's also funny how the other OC girls magically appeared as the story progressed after Levi and Avalon were just about to share a "drink" on top of the bar... AND the look on Amina's face is priceless after the future empress demands she provide her with a story of her own to entertain her! The cool, colder tone and color of the flashback in the lab is an awesome contrast to the warm and lively tone of the present-day bar. The art style is also refreshing with fuzzy backgrounds and set details that make you feel more present in the story. Can't wait to see Amina regale us with her own story! And the Chibis were a excillent way to tell a story in a more humorous way!
Will other artists be special guests?
Other artists? o.o
I read that whole comic with their snark and accents ringing in my ears as though they were just across the room. Goddamn your depictions are gorgeous ❤️🔥🌋❤️🔥
Im really glad that landed well. <3 I was really struggling with how to depict the more dialogue heavy back and forth because that was going to add SOOOOO much time if I made every single line in standard comic dialogue. The solution I think was pretty gewd.
I'm wondering if someday you could do a french version please
I would love to do other languages. I do speak a bit of Spanish but Im not 100% comfortable in any other language natively. I just wouldn't want to lose any of the vibes that come across in translation. :< Never say never tho!
"Big pp, go in mouth, nom nom...magic" 😂😂😂😂
It’s like the bunny hat trick! But in reverse with a mouth!👄
Great set Levi! The story was nicely paced and the bickering between the girls felt genuine. This was worth the wait and seeing Amina's reaction in the last panel, looking forward to the next set! And just in case you don't make a post for it, Happy Early Birthday Sabine!!!
Thanks David! Im glad everyone seems to have enjoyed the little banter haha.
oh btw! those chibi-versions of you four are so freaking adorable!!! =D and that's just 4 of the 6! looking forwards for Ket and Selena's when you come to draw them =)
It’s a nice way of conveying the story without and a whole bunch of extra work. Plus it adds a playful mood to the Sextet. ^_^
So! Many! References! It makes sense now for the title "Oreo". nicely done! I loved that Sabine was there with the popcorn, watching the drama unfold. It would be a crime and a possible wasted opportunity if Tifa doesn't taste a "Shattered Heaven" and mull over the thought if it should be copyright infringement XD Oh! and on a more curious note, do the events of "What we couldn't say" happen before or after the portals opening and grabbing people? if it's after then I think you have an excuse for part 4 =D As always Levi, great art, story and NSFW content =) Can't wait for the next part as Amina seems at a loss for words! Also when it comes to it! Happy birthday to our favourite French pirate Sabine! may ye day be filled with wondrous treasures!
That was before I decided on making everything a "shared' universe, but i don't have to retcon anything since it's mostly self contained. The short answer would be it takes places before the opening. : D
Those view amazing 👏
Wow, that was unexpected, but really good timing for my side of the world. Great work, cannot wait for episode two. Enjoy the birthday party.
I finished it at like 6am my time determined to get it out before i went to sleep so it was probably a weird time for most of my people haha.
So good also can we all ways get a text less zip???
Yes that will be the norm moving forward!
Enjoyed it and can’t wait for Cp 2