π Secret Desires - Ch 6 - Text
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tienes toda la razΓ³n Willian reis
O pessoal Γ© muito apressado melhor ter muita sensualidade do so sexo,sexo por sexo ja tem bastante historia,legal quando tem muita sensualidade envolvida antes dos atos finais
What's Nandof doing right now with this story?
IDK!!! It's slowly going nowhere. Alice keeps having these bipolar issues that it's wrong, but she's the one who initiated all of Miguel's arousal in the first place. She's a Cock Tease right now.
Maybe nandof needs a scene where both of them go to visit Daniel and Patricia and they accidentally catch them humping like rabbits in heat and watch them as they get Hot and turned on by it.
Why do I have 10 pages?
This is frustrating and unnecessary! Miguel had been so confident and sure of himself when he took Alice's robe off, removed Alice's bra, rubbed Alice's gorgeous butt cheeks and breasts, sucked Alice's gorgeous breasts, pulled Alice to him, and kissed Alice so well that Alice was kissing Miguel back! Miguel leads Alice back to the couch and starts feeling Alice's on her thin panties covering her pussy, and has Alice as wet and horny for him, as Miguel is horny for Alice! Then you have him let her walk away!? It's time for Alice and Miguel to make love to each other and fuck each other! Miguel should be as assertive with Alice as his cousin, Daniel, has been with his gorgeous mother, Patricia!
Yeah, I agree there's too much narration explaining one scene to the next. Alice is having too many of these Bi-polar flip flop mood swings where she wants to explore him sexually and suddenly she doesn't!! She started all of this when she went into his room to see how he masterbates correctly. Remember?? And now she doesn't want him?? He needs to blow her off for a minute and make her feel rejected. That way she'll want him more.
Not in the best part, I was already about to
