VANIAR [0.3] - PUBLIC RELEASE

Keep forgetting to post this from my last session, so here it is: (starting over because bug) Me, when I see "June" and "teenth" together: Juneteenth! 🙌🏿 Talking shit about the character: "Maybe I needed to occupy my life with something more... reasonable. I had no money left, and I needed to survive." ...So I joined the army. 😂 Pointing something out: I find it funny that he says "pee" instead of "piss" considering he's an adult in the army. I assume it's intended, but figured I'd point it out anyway. Suggestion: "As if he had crounched, preparing to [shoot]." Attack makes it sound like he was gonna pull out a knife and sneak closer even though alerting others with gunshots would be a wiser move for the whole base's benefit. Joke: New Skill Unlocked! Heterochromia. Error: When Dakaria says "If you want to find them", her name appears for the first time... but she hadn't told MC her name yet. 😐 Compliment: lul Her freckles are still cute. 🤭 Joke: MC: You survive by eating people? Dakaria's expression: Bitch, you eat animals everyday. 😂 Comment: "There are creatures... even within our species... that should have been eradicated centuries ago." Ooo~ is this boss foreshadowing? 👀 Joke: Dakaria: "But we're not all the same." Basically, Dakaria: They not like us. 💀 Comment: "Leaving behind the starres, and te fear." Wait, there were other people in the room? 😐 Thought: "And like you, I spent years not knowing who to blame, who to kill. Now I know." She usin' me. Thought: "if you hear what I have to show you..." Is that a Hellraiser reference? Suggestions (2): "[And by the way,] the blogs you read... I wrote them." "[And about the] blogs you read... I wrote them." Comment: "That's why I chose you." Chosen One story!~ 🥳😅 Correction: I think you meant "then time is running [out] faster than you think." If not, then leave it. Reaction: "I want to kill her." 💀 Suggestion: "[It's b]ecause I'm tired." Reaction: "Sounds good to me." Damn, that was fast. Pointing Out: "You really make one feel useful." I'm not sure if you meant "make [yourself] useful" or what. 🤔 Joke: "Will to what?" Will to Power, motherfucker! Realization: MC: *Go to sleep* Dakaria: "Not everyone is like you, soldier. Some don't have that determination in their eyes..." Yo, WTF?! Went through the pre-choice dialogue before bed yesterday and it felt odd enough to re-read today. o_o Nice.~

The PC zip link leads me to a "media file not found" page. :|