How Should the New Romance Look?
Now that Grace's chapter is released and Marion's next chapter is well underway, let's come back to the new romance that you guys voted into the story!
Last time you guys elected — by a nose — for a character who's a veteran friend of Malcolm's, disabled in the war. It'll be a positive story about camaraderie and overcoming disability... oh, and he's going to turn into a female dragon :)
We want to know what you guys think he (and later, she) should look like!
What color's his hair (or her scales)? Should his outfit include pants or a kilt? Is he going to become a dragon proper? A wyvern? A wyrm? How big should her boobs get — or does she get any at all? We'd love to hear your thoughts on these questions and more!
Let us know your design ideas, both for his human & her dragon forms. Feel free to link us to designs you like, too. We'll read and look at your feedback and then sketch up a few designs that you guys can vote on!
Speaking of votes, don't forget that there are only two days left to decide what chapter we work on after Marion's, and currently there's just a 4 vote difference for the lead! If you're part of the voting tier, be sure to click here and cast your vote!
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Finally, I want to extend a heartfelt THANK YOU from myself and the whole team for all of the enthusiasm, encouragement and kind words each of you have given us this year. Through your support, not only are we able to do our dream job, but we're also able to make a game from the heart for all TF and Visual Novel fans alike to enjoy. We hope each new chapter we add to the story brings as much joy to you as your support does to us!
Happy Holidays from Little Napoleon & the Changeling Tale Team!
Comments (32)
Keep up the good work!
I really like the idea of a persistent scar. Blues and greens would be my choice for colors, maybe blonde too. That would make her look a lot like Grace though. We already have a warm scheme, an aquatic one and earth tones, so maybe black as the primary color would be nice. A persistent color scheme would be nice too. My vote's always for digitigrade.
All I can think is red dragon, fire breather....maybe some tattered wings or missing scales. Definitely bustier than the others, a more mature woman, maybe with an eyepatch. Or maybe something like Ballalaika from black lagoon.
Dragon: He should have the ability to become anthro anytime he wants, and similarly change to go on all four when ever he wants as well.
Perhaps not the spot for it but I think it would be cool to have the possibility of Malcolm being able to TF to match each of the girls. Why should they have all the fun...?
Not a bad idea, but what should he TF to?
Human: A man with black or brown hear and a beard. He wears a red cap and the same kind of clothes as Malcom, but no kilt. Dragon: He turns into a western dragon with black or dark blue scales and should run all four.
some deep blue sapphire color scales would be great and it would be interesting to see the change in a kinda anthro state a large breasted "dragongirl" that eventually turns more into a western style dragon, 4 legs 2 wings etc also im not sure if this is how your story will end up being in the end but it would be amazing if somehow the main character, (who you control their choices) also ends up able to change with their romance choice so that they both can be happy in some way or make 2 different ending where you choose to change with them or not etc. if you are going that route that will be AMAZING and cant wait for it but if the endings are still in question and such here is an idea
I would like to see a dragon lady with a little more weight on her. Perhaps something similar to this Lugia: <a href="http://www.furaffinity.net/full/27721707/" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">http://www.furaffinity.net/full/27721707/</a> I think it is great when there are girls with round, squishy tummys. The breasts on Lugia aren't absolutely perky and point down a bit, and there is that round pudge just above the pubic bone. Muscular and tone gals are great, but round, soft dragons are under-loved! I think that the egg laying is a nice touch.
I'd say dragoness with back wings, long hair/main, large breasts, athletic/femininely muscular, long agile tail, and on the large side (~6'6" tall) with egg laying. I'm also a fan of lactation but not sure how that will fit here. :)
Wonderful to see this post. As for the soldier's design, I think blond, as others have said, and wearing trousers initially. He should be scarred across the face and missing a limb, and experiencing sorrow over his injuries and ennui over his current existence. I think his transformation should initially be restorative at first, providing a sense of elation and Godly intervention. But then he begins transitioning, first to a woman and then to a female dragon. My preferences is that she takes on the form of a humanoid dragon with a feminine bust and wings out her back, along with a fine tail. I'm a sucker for green dragons, but pink also. The picture posted earlier was a good representation: <a href="http://www.furaffinity.net/view/29664314/" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">http://www.furaffinity.net/view/29664314/</a>
As others have also said, egg-laying would also be a fine addition. Not only does it heighten the strangeness of the transformation and make it unique compared to the others, it also provides a nice thenatic character arc: from a morose soldier broken by death and the reality of war, to a dragon woman free if these things, capabke if creating life instead of taking it away.
I like the idea of short hair originally that grows long as the transformation progresses. Perhaps it eventually turns into a sort of mane (or whatever you want to call it) that grows along the spine. Maybe even a furry and feathery dragon like Flammie from The Secret of Mana?
I kind of like the hair lengthening Idea too.
the bigger the better the boobs
Blond hair is not a bad idea. No scars please. I also wouldnt mind a petite dragon (smaller in size and bust). Pink/White colored scales isn't a bad idea.
a red wyvern with medium-sized breasts
platinum drgaoness like a female bahamut, and large breasts, like beach balls, physical back strengths not an issue make them large!
Red dragon is good but pink dragon is best.
Red Dragon, best dragon. I'm also fond of spikey dragons, which would help make her visually different from most of malcom's fluffier girlfriends
I support a scene where they breathe fire up into the air on orgasm, unintentionally.
I think he should have blond hair. Short at the start but gets longer the more female he gets. at least mid back or waist length. Pants or Kilt? Why not both. Start him in pants, then have him try hiding some of the changes with a kilt. Not only does he suffer from PTSD from the war, he's missing his left arm. Blown off toward the war's end. I like the idea of a scar on his face. Starts out with the same height and build as Malcolm. Proper dragon for the final form. Not only does he get his left arm back with these changes, he now needs to cope with two extra limbs (the wings). Give him (now Her) a muscular yet feminine figure with scales of green, red and blue. With a chest size similar to Grace's final form. Horns that start red at the base and darken to black at the tips.
Given this setting i'm very much a fan of a dark or sharp green color for the scales with possibly golden colored horns and maybe spikes growing out to match the blond hair color. Kinda of a transition from hair to horns that also helps Malcolm recognize the character on color palate alone. along with the scars.
YESSSSSS Durg tgtf!!! That said, you know what Durg design I like... :V :V But in more specifics, I'd advise the classic Lizard scenario where they've lost a limb to a plot device, and the magic makes them regrow it all scaly and nice. I'd love some friendship bonding before the magic starts taking hold, and they need to hide the progressions while your friendship increases. Oh! And a cool facial scar would add character/recognition (Zuko or Anime Protagonist styled) between forms!
Thanks!
I thought that the dragon relationship was a straight up female character when it was voted? Also, would leg paralysis, wheelchair due to being unable to walk, becomes something like a western dragon, but buff and with huge breasts. Bigger than Grace's set. Flying dragon at a cost of transformation. Can she lay eggs too?
The concept that was approved was a service member that served with Malcolm being injured and he turns into a female dragon. The female only options were a nurse, the otter, and the bird.
Hmmm, so Jessie has a warm color palette, Marion has palette of natural colors, and Grace has an aquatic centered palette, so how about the new character has a sort of dark, volcanic sort of palette? Charcoal blacks and greys shot through with fiery yellows and dark oranges like a lava flow to compliment her draconian nature? It could also reflect the shared darkness Malcolm and his friend have lived through together. Oh, and wyvern, because wing arms are lovely, and she should end up walking on all fours, but not fully quadrupedal. Also, I love the idea of her standing on all fours, yet still having her eyes level with Malcolm's. I'm thinking something along the lines of a pterosaur stance, but equally able to walk on two limbs or four like a classic wyvern. <a href="https://goo.gl/images/SqiK96" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://goo.gl/images/SqiK96</a> <a href="https://goo.gl/images/CL4b5j" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://goo.gl/images/CL4b5j</a> <a href="https://goo.gl/images/XNxnqd" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://goo.gl/images/XNxnqd</a> <a href="https://goo.gl/images/6mPjRw" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://goo.gl/images/6mPjRw</a>
I think this would be kind of funny from a story standpoint if the character has a leg problem as a human, and then when transformed the leg problem is gone BUT now has a wing/arm problem.
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If your comment was deleted it wasn't by the Changeling Tale team, maybe a site error?
If you've got some visual reference I'd be happy to look at that too! :V Whatever you have that might influence the design is fine!
