Talking about Divine Providence Fall and subsequent updates
Before sharing my thoughts, I wanted to first talk about the update plans for DPF.
I plan to take some time in the future to do several short story collections, where each short story completes the entire story of one character, giving these girls I love an ending, without sandbox and NSFW.
Then Kebet's story is basically over. As for future stories? In fact I haven't figured it out at all, and it's very likely I won't continue writing this story, since even just the current content has gone beyond my capabilities.
The prologue mentioned three powers - the Shadow, the Lord of light, and the Chosen One, but none of them appeared in Kebet. Future stories would basically involve the MC formally confronting these powers.
I have many very good ideas in my mind. Even though I've thought through these plots dozens of times, every time I think of them again, I still get so moved that I tear up. But I truly lack the ability to string these ideas into a complete story chain, and the sandbox format was an inevitable compromise.
Then I wanted to talk about the MC. If you haven't read Ai's info yet, remember to take a look, for some of his backstory.
I really, really love DPF's MC. His reaction to everything is basically my favorite way, to me, he's a true badass, a man who embodies true power.
He may go out of his way to help others, but will never go out of his way to ingratiate himself with them.
He's a good MC, but not a suitable MC for an adult game. However, this wasn't my original thinking in the beginning.
Before the v0.1 release, the MC's character settings were completely different from now. To put it simply, he was a slightly cold person with emotions, but after witnessing the darkness of the universe for over 100 years, he became extremely cold, losing all emotion and empathy. That history had a huge impact on him.
Why is this a harem story? Because Aisha felt she needed the power of others to help the MC together, this was a story of the MC and the girls saving each other. By the way, Aisha wasn't that hardcore originally either.
But after I released the initial v0.05, I received a lot of criticism and started rethinking and reshaping the MC, changing some completed plots as well.
The end result was changing the MC into what he is now. He experienced a lot, but those things didn't negatively impact him at all. From beginning to end there was no change, from the very start his mind had already reached its peak, and until the story's conclusion he needed no growth at all.
When I first released this game, I did consider a lot of adult content, but after the MC changed, this game was no longer suitable to be an adult game.
Then I wanted to talk about Elycia. She's another character that changed tremendously.
Originally, she was basically just like Xena, a character who would actively and quickly sleep with the MC, with almost no backstory.
Then you all voted for me to make her a loli, so I completely overturned the original settings, resulting in the Elycia you see now.
As a creator, to not even have settled on the initial content or even the MC's character settings, instead making spur of the moment changes and additions, this is an absolutely unforgivable massive mistake.
Thank you all for your continual support and anticipation all this time. I also have more time and passion now to finish this story properly.
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So i created a patreon account specifically to make a feedback about DPF. I might not have a good english sentence construction and a good english vocabulary but honestly, All the words i know does not explain my love for the story line and the MC's Progression throughout the story, I may have downloaded for other reasons yes but this is something to yearn for. Especially about how she finally remembers him, I felt touched by it. Although the MC doesn't love her because 200 years of course but Aisha still loves him either because of his efforts or because she never really lost feelings for him. So about the H-Scenes, i feel like they weree abit rushed especially the one where she immediately does "devil tango" after she remembers him which surprised me since she immediately adapted to the past life which she now remembers. That's really all i could say i wish i could've said more like writing love the storyline in 100 different languages but that's really all i could think of. Looking forward to the progression of the storyline and DPF itself. 9.9/10 as of right now.
Ive created patreon only to say this to you, hope it helps: Seems like you want to create something very different than a NSFW game, I didnt played the game so i dont know how good you are at writing and stuff but even so, do the game you want and tell the story you need to tell, if the characters grow by themselves thats a good thing, that means theyre good characters. If you cant create what you want in a NSFW environment then move to a indie visual novel and do your thing (maybe do a little spin-off or other game to keep some income), if you only hear what people want of you then you would never make the game you want, thats the game you should make, the one you would be proud of even if nobody ever plays it, its not gonna be easy but i cant read your words and keep quiet. I love videogames as a whole, one of my favourite games is Eternal Senia, a little rpgmaker game that tells a history about two sisters and theyre love for each other, dont try to make the next baldurs Gate or stains Gate, make the game thats inside of you and who knows, maybe it works great and you can keep developing the way you want. Good luck