I need help with Tohka's story.
I'm planning to continue Tohka's story. I've been thinking for several days and have come up with multiple scenarios, all of which make sense and fit the characters. However, when I actually start writing, it still feels like something is missing.
I’d like your help—should I focus on how to restart the relationship between Tohka and the MC directly, or should I first create some "daily life" scenes that naturally lead them to resolve their issues?
In any case, I’d love to hear any of your thoughts on Tohka’s story, maybe just a random sentence from you could spark a huge inspiration for me.
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Although this topic has already reached a conclusion, I still welcome any of your ideas, including "daily life" scenarios. Many of my players know DAL better than I do, and any concrete ideas would be very helpful.
She needs wholesome love too
I agree with the other commenters, I think some daily life stuff where the MC naturally gets involved with Tohka again and kind of rekindles or reinforces their relationship and then maybe her and the MC come across something naughty while they're interacting, like maybe she sees a random couple making out in public and it reminds her of the time her and the MC were together and gets needy for him again.
Have to agree. I personally think this man is cooking.
I think I might have been too eager to resolve all the potential conflicts between Tohka and MC at once. One of the storylines I came up with even led to Tohka reversing into Tenka prematurely.
I think daily life short stories would be a good approach for developing Tohka and the MC's relationship further
I think it's lengthier to write the "daily life" scenes, but it would be smoother and more naturally. Then, there could be some 'sparking' scene, like a 'Looking at him doing these mundane things, it makes it feels so real that we are a family' for example.
I'd say some daily life stuff at first then over time Tohka gets reminded of that night with the MC