May 11, 2023
Details Surrounding Emeric's "state"
Hey, hey! I added a bit more to Chapter 75 - right after Lily's POV.
I did get some good feedback and after a bit of thinking, I came to agree with it, so I added dialogue between Nathaniel and Ruby where they go over the way Nat killed Emeric.
I like the contrast between Lily's POV and the dialogue between Nat and Ruby.
Please, let me know what you think!
Comments (3)
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Xaver Klein · May 11, 2023
Its a good addition indeed
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cerim · May 11, 2023
All thanks to your feedback :)
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Paper_Link189 · May 11, 2023
It definitely fits with Nate's character and is quite ingenious. It's a good addition.
